| 谈谈英语写作的基本方法 |
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| 作者：佚名 文章来源：不详 点击数： 更新时间：2007-4-8 0:17:58 |
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p;very tired,the stepmother forced her tocut...或
Although very tired,Aqiao was forced(by the stepmother)tocut...
3.简练。不要堆砌修饰性词语。在没有把握的情况下，不要用从句。应该多用简单句。例如翻译如下一句：“当我在打乒乓球的时候，就决定要到湖里去游泳。”有以下两种译法：
①While I was playing table tennis,I decided that I would go for a swim in the lake.
②While playing table tennis,I decided to go for a swim inthe lake.
以上两句从语法上讲都正确，但第二句简洁，运用了一个短语代替了一个从句，达到了简洁的目的。
又如，When Christmas was coming,Della had not enongh moneyto buy Jim,who is her husband,a present,so she went to a shopto sell her hair in order that she could buy a gold chainworthy of Jim's gold watch.
这个句子过份冗长，既有并列句，也有复合句，复合句中既有时间状语从句、目的状语从句，还有定语从句。与其辛辛苦苦去构筑这样的复杂句子，还不如把它分为几个简单句，显得轻松、洗练一些。
Christmas was coming.Della had not enough money to buy apresent for his husband Jim.So she had to sell her hair.Aftershe got the money,she bought Jim a gold chain.
下面再谈谈初学写作时在造句方面常出现的一些错误实例。
1)句子冗长累赘、意思重复，例如：
①The army advanced forward after the big battle.（一场大的战斗后，部队向前进发。）这个句子的问题在于句中的"advanced"本身就是"march forward"的意思，而在其后出现"forward"实属多余，应去掉。
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