| 谈谈英语写作的基本方法 |
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| 作者：佚名 文章来源：不详 点击数： 更新时间：2007-4-8 0:17:58 |
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ecause I felt hot.用词多，绕圈子，太罗嗦。可以改成：I took off my coat,becauseI felt hot.简短明了。只要句意明确，多余部分应尽量删去。
2)修饰语的位置不对。修饰语的位置用错直接影响意思的准确表达。这一点在文章上一部分已谈到。我们再来看两个例子。
①I nearly lost five dollars yesterday.
I lost nearly five dollars yesterday.
这两句话由于nearly的位置不同，其含义也截然不同。第一句“我昨天差点丢了5美元”，言下之意是：没丢钱。第二句“我昨天丢了近五美元”意思是我丢了钱。不过不到5美元。
再如：②She decided not to go.他决定不去了。She did notdecide to go.他没决定去呀。否定词用在不同的位置上，意思大不一样。因此，平时在阅读和练习中要注意。
3)代词所指不明确。例如：
Peggy held a piece of bread and jam in one hand and thetelephone receiver in the other.She kept eating it while shetalked.后面一句话中的"it"指什么呢？指"a piece of bread andjam"还是指"telephone receiver"，这使人费解。在英语写作中要避免这种指代不清的句子。这句话可改为：Peggy held in one hand thetelephone receiver and in the other a piece of bread and jam,which she kept eating while she talkcd.
4.模糊不清的比较。例如：
①I like John as much as Tom.这句话里究竟是I like John asmuch as I like Tom，还是I like John as much as Tom likes John.这种比较模糊不清。
②My home is nearer to our school than yours.不知这里的yours是指your home.还是your school.这句话应改为：My home isnearer to our school than yours is.或My home is nearer &n上一页 [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10] ... 下一页 >>
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